{"id":3611,"date":"2011-11-17T14:28:39","date_gmt":"2011-11-17T14:28:39","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.monsterindia.com\/career-advice\/10-words-and-terms-that-ruin-a-resume-3611\/"},"modified":"2011-11-17T14:28:39","modified_gmt":"2011-11-17T14:28:39","slug":"10-words-and-terms-that-ruin-a-resume","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.foundit.sg\/career-advice\/10-words-and-terms-that-ruin-a-resume\/","title":{"rendered":"10 Words and Terms That Ruin a Resume"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\"><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" size=\"1\">By Charles Purdy, Monster Senior Editor<\/font><\/span><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-size: small;text-align: left\">Your resume needs an update &#8212; that is, if your resume is like that of most people, it&#8217;s not as good as it could be. The problem is language: Most resumes are a thicket of deadwood words and phrases &#8212; empty cliches, annoying jargon and recycled buzzwords<\/span><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-size: small;text-align: left\">. Recruiters, HR folks and hiring managers see these terms over and over again, and it makes them sad.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;<\/span><\/font><\/p>\n<div><span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" color=\"#000000\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><br \/><\/font><\/span><\/div>\n<div><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\">Wouldn<\/span><\/font><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-family: Verdana;font-size: small\">&#8216;<\/span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\">t you rather make them happy? It<\/span><\/font><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-family: Verdana;font-size: small\">&#8216;<\/span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\">s time to start raking out your resume, starting with these (and similar) terms.<\/span><span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" color=\"#000000\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><\/font><\/span><br style=\"text-align: left\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold;text-align: left\">1. &#8220;Salary negotiable&#8221;<\/strong><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">Yes, they know. If you<\/span><\/font><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-family: Verdana;font-size: small\">&#8216;<\/span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">re wasting a precious line of your resume on this term, it looks as though you<\/span><\/font><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-family: Verdana;font-size: small\">&#8216;<\/span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">re padding &#8212; that you<\/span><\/font><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-family: Verdana;font-size: small\">&#8216;<\/span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">ve run out of things to talk about. If your salary is not negotiable, that would be somewhat unusual. (Still, don&#8217;t put that on your resume either.)<\/span><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold;text-align: left\">2. &#8220;References available by request&#8221;<\/strong><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">See the preceding comment about unnecessary terms.<\/span><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold;text-align: left\">3. &#8220;Responsible for ______&#8221;<\/strong><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">Reading this term, the recruiter can almost picture the C-average, uninspired employee mechanically fulfilling his job requirements &#8212; no more, no less. Having been responsible for something isn\u00a1\u00a6t something you did &#8212; it&#8217;s something that happened to you. Turn phrases like &#8220;responsible for&#8221; into &#8220;managed,&#8221; &#8220;led&#8221; or other decisive, strong verbs.<\/span><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold;text-align: left\">4. &#8220;Experience working in ______&#8221;<\/strong><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">Again, experience is something that happens to you &#8212; not something you achieve. Describe your background in terms of achievements.<\/span><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold;text-align: left\">5. &#8220;Problem-solving skills&#8221;<br \/><\/strong><br style=\"text-align: left\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">You know who else has problem-solving skills? Monkeys. Dogs. On your resume, stick to skills that require a human.<\/span><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold;text-align: left\">6. &#8220;Detail-oriented&#8221;<\/strong><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">So, you pay attention to details. Well, so does everyone else. Don<\/span><\/font><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-family: Verdana;font-size: small\">&#8216;<\/span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">t you have something unique to tell the hiring manager? Plus, putting this on your resume will make that accidental typo in your cover letter or resume all the more comical.<\/span><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold;text-align: left\">7. &#8220;Hardworking&#8221;<\/strong><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">Have you ever heard the term &#8220;show &#8212; don<\/span><\/font><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-family: Verdana;font-size: small\">&#8216;<\/span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">t tell&#8221;? This is where that might apply. Anyone can call himself a hard worker. It<\/span><\/font><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-family: Verdana;font-size: small\">&#8216;<\/span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">s a lot more convincing if you describe situations in concrete detail in which your hard work benefited an employer.<\/span><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold;text-align: left\">8. &#8220;Team player&#8221;<\/strong><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">See the preceding comment about showing instead of telling. There are very few jobs that don\u00a1\u00a6t involve working with someone else. If you have relevant success stories about collaboration, put them on your resume. Talk about the kinds of teams you worked on, and how you succeeded.<\/span><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold;text-align: left\">9. &#8220;Proactive&#8221;&nbsp;<\/strong><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">This is a completely deflated buzzword. Again, show rather than tell.<\/span><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold;text-align: left\">10. &#8220;Objective&#8221;<\/strong><br style=\"text-align: left\"><br style=\"text-align: left\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">This term isn<\/span><\/font><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-family: Verdana;font-size: small\">&#8216;<\/span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">t always&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"text-align: left\">verboten<\/em><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">, but you should use it carefully. If your objective is to get the job you<\/span><\/font><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-family: Verdana;font-size: small\">&#8216;<\/span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">ve applied for, there<\/span><\/font><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-family: Verdana;font-size: small\">&#8216;<\/span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">s no need to spell that out on your resume with its own heading. A resume objective&nbsp;<\/span><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">is usually better replaced by a career summary<\/span><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">&nbsp;describing your background, achievements and what you have to offer an employer. An exception might be if you haven<\/span><\/font><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-family: Verdana;font-size: small\">&#8216;<\/span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">t applied for a specific job and don<\/span><\/font><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-family: Verdana;font-size: small\">&#8216;<\/span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">t have a lot of experience that speaks to the position you<\/span><\/font><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"font-family: Verdana;font-size: small\">&#8216;<\/span><font class=\"Apple-style-span\" face=\"Verdana\" size=\"2\"><span class=\"Apple-style-span\" style=\"text-align: left\">d like to achieve.<\/span><\/font><\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>By Charles Purdy, Monster Senior EditorYour resume needs an update &#8212; that is, if your resume is like that of most people, it&#8217;s not as good as it could be. The problem is language: Most resumes are a thicket of deadwood words and phrases &#8212; empty cliches, annoying jargon and recycled buzzwords. 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